My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

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My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by djastral232 » Tue Oct 16, 2007 12:07

Since I couldn't find any original Sabayon-cover-artwork on the net I decided to build my own. I think that improvements can be made on it as to have more stylish and professional look. Any comments and recommendations about my work of ALL you on this forum will be highly appreciated.

If you like it and you want the Hi-RES file, I can send it to you via your email.

Thank you in advance. Have a nice day. :wink:

Stelios Lagiannakis.

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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by kstephens98 » Tue Oct 16, 2007 19:14

VERY Nice indeed. I really like it alot. Great job!!! :D :D :D

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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by Wait...What? » Tue Oct 16, 2007 21:09

Very nice! Wireless is spelled incorrectly though. :oops:
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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by koch » Tue Oct 16, 2007 21:14

very good :D
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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by Fitzcarraldo » Tue Oct 16, 2007 21:28

Very nice, but perhaps a bit too similar to the SL DVD released with the current issue of Linux Magazine?:

http://w3.linux-magazine.com/issue/84/L ... ne_DVD.pdf

Nit picking, I know, but "out-of the box" should really be "out-of-the-box".

Also, is there a reason why have you put the logo of Linux Magazine on the DVD? Were you trying to make a replacement for it?

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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by GI_James » Wed Oct 17, 2007 7:50

I like it... eventhough wireless is misssspellled... but, other than that, it rocks.
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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by djastral232 » Thu Oct 18, 2007 0:08

OK, I uploaded the corrected version...

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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by GI_James » Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:22

djastral232 wrote:OK, I uploaded the corrected version...


but I'm out of printable DVDs...
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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by djastral232 » Sat Oct 20, 2007 14:02

So, there is nobody to suggest any modifications to my artwork yet? I would like to make a more pro' look...any ideas plz ?

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Re: My Sabayon 3.4f DVD cover (Plz comment my work if you like)

Post by bobbob1016 » Tue Oct 30, 2007 22:12

Could you move the text down a bit, it looks like it'll print in the middle of the DVD, on the hole. I installed a gimp plugin that shapes an image to show what it'll look like on a printable DVD, and some text was in the hole.

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